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In this side of town…

After a 10 hour shift, the last thing she sees before falling sleep, is the box of tissues she used to wipe her tears and some cold take out for him.

In another side of town…

After a 2 hour fuck, the last thing he sees before falling sleep, is the box of tissues he used to wipe his dick and some money on the night table for a nameless woman.

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  1. That is somehow, so describing, even thought you use so few words… I’m just… blown away in thought.

    It is not the amount of words that count, but the meaning.

    July 18, 2010
    • Welcome to the blog, Tropshi.

      This is the second of these new series “quickies”. Just take one picture and the first words my guts or heart or mind speak aloud.

      Excellent writing exercise to define one´s true mood/feeling/thoughts at that exact moment.

      BTW: l like what you are doing and how you are doing it 😉

      July 18, 2010
      • Thank you Silvia.

        Sounds like an interesting thing to do, these “quickies”, live the idea! Might try it myself, but somehow I doubt the result would be good like yours.. 🙂

        I’m wondering.. do you take challenges? I have a photo I love… But it always make me wonder what other see in it.

        And thank you again! 🙂

        July 18, 2010
        • YES YES YES YES!!!!

          Vanilla LOVES challenges!!!

          this is one thing l would really really look forward: people sending me pics so l can write something short about it!

          Hit it woman ;!

          vanillanorth@gmail.com

          July 18, 2010
  2. I love this series! Can’t wait to see what picture it’s going to be next!

    July 18, 2010
    • Do you have a “weird” one – l am a sucker for weirdness – send it to me, and l will write about it 😉

      July 19, 2010
  3. I’m so glad you stopped by from subWOW’s because I’m loving your place. Thanks for finding me.

    July 19, 2010
    • Same here UM. l am glad that l peek around the comments to find more and more great blogs 😀
      *HUGS*

      July 19, 2010
  4. Wow.
    Heartbreaking.
    Powerful.

    July 19, 2010
    • Thanks, and welcome to Vanilla’s 🙂

      (BTW, kaishon is such a sweet heartbreaker)

      🙂

      July 20, 2010
  5. Holy cow! You don’t mince words and you are right to the point.

    July 19, 2010
    • Welcome, Velva!
      That is the challenge: few words, first impressions…

      Awesome that you liked it and you stop by!

      😀

      July 19, 2010
  6. Really great!

    Love the picture – did you take the photo?

    July 19, 2010
  7. so descriptive in so few words! it just kinda hits you. i had to re-read it a couple times. can’t wait til the next ‘quickie’!!

    July 19, 2010
  8. intense! and i’m with everyone else – great photo!

    July 19, 2010
  9. Arthur Park #

    I am taking your challenge, with an old text, and a photo I just HAD to steal – it triggered the text. Photo and text is here,

    http://bit.ly/cbN9gQ

    And since I just found this new toy, I am vlogging it at bambuser.com, in English – I don’t know if I got the translation right, but I tried.

    http://bit.ly/cptyLG

    Tomorrow, Vanilla.

    July 20, 2010
  10. Very nice article, thanks! I’ve subscribed to your RSS feed. Please keep up posting.

    July 22, 2010
  11. So, so good.

    Love it.

    July 22, 2010
  12. Nic #

    Brilliant contrast, I like how tissues symbolise two very different yet related scenes.
    =]

    July 29, 2010
  13. This is awesome chica! You are a very talented writer. xoxoxoxo

    July 31, 2010
  14. @A Vapid Blonde
    @Nic
    @Gadgerson

    Thank you ladies.
    Back from vacation, now 😉

    August 1, 2010
  15. am photo obsessed + love this idea = you are in trouble lady.

    you’ll be hearing from me

    (damn! managed to sound creepy again…)

    August 3, 2010

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